Blogging to Bolster Your Point of View
“Indiana is growing – but we can’t neglect transit as a quality of life and economic development priority,” Michael Huber CEO of the Indy Chamber and Steve Sullivan, CEO of MIBOR Realtor Association agree. Both are in favor of raising taxes in Marion County to improve transit services. Huber and Sullivan use several tactics to strengthen their argument in favor of our investing in a transit system:
Offering details and explanations of the proposed plan:
- New rapid-transit lines
- All-day, high-frequency bus service
- Weekend and crosstown service
- Tax would be an additional 25 cents for every $100 of income, less than $10 a month for the average household
- Who will benefit? Low-income households, senior citizens, people with disabilities, healthcare and hospitality workers who have evening and weekend hours, employers who want to attract employees
Statistics:
- Marion Country gained 4000 residents in 2015
- Indianapolis is the nation’s 14th largest city, but our bus fleet ranks 84th
- Brookings Institute ranks Indy as 64th out of the 100 largest metros in transit services
Motivational statements:
- “It’s a vote to bring new investment to struggling neighborhoods…”
- “Better service connects people and jobs, and creates self-sufficiency.”
- “Transit creates upward mobility and independence for those who rely on it most.”
“I just do not get it,” says Mitch Roob, Executive VP of Keramida Environmental, taking a stand on the other side of the debate. “How would a train-like bus benefit more than a very small portion of the community? Is it equitable to charge someone for a service they likely never will use or for that matter even see?”
To bolster his argument against taxing Indy residents to fund a rapid transit system, Roob employs three tactics:
Statistics:
Dallas invested more than $8.2 billion in a system that today carries only 4% of the area’s daily work commuters
Atlanta’s transit system ridership is down 15% from 2001
Turning opponents’ arguments against their case:
“Advocates suggest that “transit-oriented development” will spur development in the proximity of the transit corridor”. If so, says Roob, transit will add value to real estate, and the incremental property tax can pay for the service.
Emotional appeal – painting a picture:
“Trains and buses are not happy places. Somber, hurried passengers cast their wary glance away from the strangers next to them whose personal space they have inadvertently but necessarily invaded.”
Which side makes a more powerful statement. Truth is, both articles are impactful because both sides take a stand on the issue and then use various tactics to bolster their stance in the eyes of readers. Whether it’s business-to-business blog writing or business to consumer blog writing, the blog content itself needs to use opinion to clarify what differentiates that business, that professional practice, or that organization from its peers.
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